Ok so i will admit i didnt quite understand this as i dont speak.. spanish is it? But this is why i judged it quite poorly..
First off, I question how much of this content is the owners. Reason being a lot of the background images are stretched on the screen as well as there being several different art styles.
Secondly, its hardly a flash animation/movie. I Suppose you could class it as a interactive movie? but considering there is more animation compared to writing, i couldn't really judge this with a large rating. Still at least there was some effort, but you definately should try to create some of your own work other than using little bits and peices of work that was most likely googled and used.
Anyway, I hope this doesn't discourage you or what not, but definately try to add your own unique work!
good luck for future submissions =)