ok...
i believe this is the second flash video of yours ive reviewed. and well... not much has changed. a simple loop.
Have you ever thought about putting more work into your peice?? truly.
One thing i did notice about this is that it was quite clear the apple did not go into the dogs mouth, but continued down its body. This could seriously be fixed quite easily.
As for my advice, i suggest you put more effort in your work in future peices, Your dog idea could be quite good. So utilize this and be a bit of a perfectionist. that way, you will get better revies from me :p